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(no subject) [May. 23rd, 2006|08:45 pm]
Fanfiction Review
gal_montag
So, I wrote this like, three years ago. I'm struck with the sneaking suspicion that my style hasn't changed much since. But I dunno, since it's mine and I'm always looking at it.

Title: Noir
Author: Bartleby
Fandom: Harry Potter
Pairing: Ron/Harry
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Harry is afraid of the dark...
Archive: No
Feedback: Uh-huh
Series/Sequel: No
Disclaimer: Harry, the Dursleys, the Weasleys and Hogwarts belong to J.K. Rowling and to Warner Brothers. They're not mine.

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This one I wrote about five months ago. It's RPF, but I don't think it would be necessary to know who the people are to understand the story.

Title: That Girl
Fandom: Queens of the Stone Age
Characters: Mark Lanegan, Nick Oliveri, Brody Dalle, Troy VanLeeuwen
Prompt: #85 She
Word Count: 323
Rating: PG, but only barely
Summary: Genderfuck, you know you love it
Disclaimer: These people aren't mine, I don't know them, I don't claim to. This is all fiction.
Warnings: The word "dyke"

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And a sequel...

Title: Don't Dream It...
Fandom: Queens of the Stone Age
Characters: Mark Lanegan, Brody Dalle, PJ Harvey
Prompt: #40 Sight
Word Count: 197
Rating: G
Summary: The continuing adventures of Girl!Mark Lanegan
Disclaimer: These people aren't mine, I don't know them, I don't claim to. This is all fiction.

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So. In my own TL;DR kind of way, I'd like some feedback, please and thank you. Have I changed as a writer? For the better or the worse?
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Pimping my fandom. :) [May. 23rd, 2006|12:53 pm]
Fanfiction Review

ingriam
Not one of my fics, though.

Title: The Conquered

Fandom: Guyver

Rating: T, for violence and language

Warnings: none

Pairings: Sho/Mizuki Agito/Shizu minor Zektor/Elegen

Summary: The destruction of Chronos does not lead to peace. It leads to a new world tyrant. But that Government cannot face the Advents and Earth is lost, leading to a quest among the stars.


This is one of the longest WIPs for Guyver that I've read. A very good one, too. It focuses on Sho and Agito for the most part, but Aptom, Imakarum and the other characters do get a fair amount of time of their own. The thing that most caught me was the seer ruthlessness of the Advents when theyh returned. It fit, considering just what the Advents designed the human race to be in the Guyver manga.

Still, it was a very interesting read. Nice long chapters, too.

The Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/473336/1/
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Time for some of my own self-pimpage! [May. 23rd, 2006|11:44 am]
Fanfiction Review

raina_chan
Alright. I'll try to keep my self pimping down, because God knows I want to do a lot of it. :D

So, I'll just start with my one-shot.

Title: My Best Friend
Fandom: Kingdom Hearts II
Rating: T, for minor cursing
Warnings: None
Pairings: Very, very, very light Akuroku. (Aren't you all sick of that by now? XD)
Summary: Everyone knows the nobodies lack feelings. Yet, why did Axel focus so many of his motives around Roxas? What was so great about their friendship?


Here the story be!

Also, I guess I should mention this. Try to review if you can for stories pimped out here. This is mainly for those who think they need more feedback, so... Yeah. Try to deliver. XD

Peace!
-Raina, who needs to get more people to join
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(no subject) [May. 23rd, 2006|06:43 am]
Fanfiction Review

hakane_
[mood |complacentcomplacent]
[music |The Hellacopters- "No Song Unheard"]

An attempt at self-pimpage...Because something is better than nothing, I suppose, even if it is just an idiotic drabble.


Title: 3 Vices of a Shinobi
Fandom: Naruto
Rating: PG, just to be safe
Warnings: None
Pairings: None
Summary: Orochimaru muses about his teammates, and the things that can bring a ninja down. [Sannin-centric Drabble]

Here it be.
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I shamelessly try for first self-pimping post. 8D; Why hlo thar [May. 23rd, 2006|01:17 am]
Fanfiction Review

ladypalazzo
[mood |anxiousanxious]
[music |Advance Wars 2 - Adder's Theme]

Title: + Ange et Diable +

Fandom: La Pucelle Tactics, first and foremost, somewhat an unavoidable Disgaea and Makai Kingdom crossover. If you don't know the fandom, I'll gratefully welcome concrits on writing style alone. ♥ Just bear in mind the narrative bits and bizarre Next Chapter previews are a hallmark of the games the story is based in.

Rating: T

Warnings (if there are any): None I can think of. 8D; A li'l violent in bits, but nothing worse than, say, LotR's Helm's Deep.

Pairings (if there are any): Maybe in the future, but I'm really trying for plot first. XD; Um....Demon Overlord Culotte brings all the girls to the yard?

Summary: And so ends a tale that would become a legend...a story of a girl who came to rule over all demons as the Demon Overlord Prier. Not quite...

Here goes!

Merci! :3

Happy Mask Salesgirl


Also, one of the most amazing Makai Kingdom stories evah, by Rayless Night!

Title: Wishes

Fandom: Makai Kingdom

Rating: T

Warnings (if there are any): None.

Pairings (if there are any): Zetta x Salome.

Summary: A history of Salome The Traitor. Complete.

Join me in giving her much deserved reviewings, favings, and alerts. ♥ You won't be sorry!
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